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你会在雅思作文中运用令人头疼的从句吗?

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从句这个存在使很多人都头疼。对于不会的人,根本就是天方夜谭;对于会的人,根本就不会使用。不管你是属于哪个群体,从句是一定要会的,而且要在会的基础上灵活使用。写作中从句使用是最多的。下面是一篇分数为8分的雅思作文,让我们一起来看看从句在作文中的使用吧。

In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university students. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.

It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel(定), but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent a period of time(定).

The reason for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university(定) is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world(同). By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places(定) have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research(定), as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.

However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do something completely different from a university course(宾). But overall, I think this is less likely today(宾), when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.(状)

My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons(表). That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this. (8)

在这个8分的大作文中运用到了所有的从句。从句是一定要用的,但是作文要长短句结合才会更好。


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