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雅思写作段落展不开?举个例子如何?

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很多同学都抱怨说雅思写作中写不够字数,只有论点而不知道怎么论证,今天就给大家一条妙计:举例子!通过举例来展开段落可以使主题句的抽象意思具体化,生动的例证可以给读者留下一个清晰、有趣、深刻而且信服的印象。废话少说,直接上例子:

e.g. This term several useful and interesting courses have been offered. (主题句)And introduction to European culture, for instance, gives us a lot of background knowledge of the history of European philosophy, literature, and arts. From time to time we see slide shows of famous paintings and hear tapes of famous pieces of music, and they make the lectures all the more interesting. American Society and Culture is another course that attracts a large audience. The teacher, who visited the United States not long ago, discusses new trends and changes in American life as well as American history and traditions. We like these and other courses very much, because they help us not only to improve our English but also to broaden our vision.

在这段中,作者举了两个例子来说明有些课程如第一句所说“既有用又有趣”。

e.g. Knowledge often results only after persistent investigation.(主题句) Albert Einstein, after a length examination of the characteristics of matter and energy, formulated his famous Theory of Relativity, which now acts as a basis for further research in nuclear physics. Using plaster casts of footprints, fingerprints, and stray strands of hair, a detective pertinaciously pursues the criminal. After years of work Annie Jump Cannon perfected the classification of the spectra of some 350,000 stars. Investigations into the causes of polio have provided us with the means for prevention and cure of this dreaded diseases only after many years of research. As students, we too are determined in our investigation to find, retain, and contribute to the store of human knowledge. (- Earl Rudolph)

这段中使用了几个名人的一系列实例来阐述一个中心思想,将“坚持不懈的调查研究”这个抽象的概念具体化,使内容更生动有趣。希望今天跟大家分享的内容能够对大家的写作有帮助,各位考鸭加油ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ノ゙


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